A song/poem thing...tell me what you think.

Candy-coated Fake · Post by **Candy-coated Fake** » 6/21/2003, 2:55 pm

Here it is. Don't be mean...just tell me what you like or don't like.

Tattered Dreams
By Richele

She holds on to her false-coloured vision
leaving reality to wither into flame
Unbeknownst to her young mind
her dreams will be fantasies devoid of names
Her life has morphed into a story
that trees whisper with forgotten words
Can she hear the blood of screaming pain
drip into the void of everlasting hurt?

I wish I could open her blinded eyes
to a world composed of lustful hopes
We dance together and weave a thought
and tangle ourselves in twisted ropes.

Now she's lost in the Paths of the Dead
voice are calling, beckoning her to die
Following the light of years long past
the putrid water stifiles her cries.
She should have left dreaming for the evening
when doors can be locked and are chained
I'd love to reach through the unknown depths
to save myself from drowning in vain.

Thar ya go!

stinkythecat · Post by **stinkythecat** » 6/21/2003, 3:06 pm

I don't think you wrote than hun.

Candy-coated Fake · Post by **Candy-coated Fake** » 6/21/2003, 3:07 pm

What makes you think I didn't write it? I wrote it, geez.

megxyz128 · Post by **megxyz128** » 6/21/2003, 3:12 pm

stinkythecat wrote:I don't think you wrote than hun.

ok really, either your someone from the board trying to be funny or you're just a really big douche bag. i honestly can't tell.

emily · Post by **emily** » 6/21/2003, 3:14 pm

I think this person just wants to cause trouble.

Candy-coated Fake · Post by **Candy-coated Fake** » 6/21/2003, 3:14 pm

megxyz128 wrote:
stinkythecat wrote:I don't think you wrote than hun.
ok really, either your someone from the board trying to be funny or you're just a really big douche bag. i honestly can't tell.

Thank you...I honestly can't stand people like that. Hee hee...douche bag

But the real question is "What do you think of what I wrote?" Forget the "douche bag", please.

stinkythecat · Post by **stinkythecat** » 6/21/2003, 3:15 pm

I'm sorry if I offended anyone... but it just doesn't seem to me like she wrote that. If she did, congrats, it's excellent but something makes me doubt it.

emily · Post by **emily** » 6/21/2003, 3:15 pm

you misunderestimated her then.

stinkythecat · Post by **stinkythecat** » 6/21/2003, 3:16 pm

Then I must've.

Candy-coated Fake · Post by **Candy-coated Fake** » 6/21/2003, 3:18 pm

And why do you doubt it? Unlike some people (not making reference to anyone in particular) I don't enjoy copying and pasting someone else's work. That's one of the lowest things anyone can do, in my opinion.

stinkythecat · Post by **stinkythecat** » 6/21/2003, 3:20 pm

Well I think you deserve an honest apology from me to you. I'm sorry.

Candy-coated Fake · Post by **Candy-coated Fake** » 6/21/2003, 3:23 pm

Good, and I accept it. Maybe you shouldn't be so quick to pass judgement.

Candy-coated Fake · Post by **Candy-coated Fake** » 6/21/2003, 3:37 pm

Damnit, now no one will read my stuff. Stupid stinkycat.

stinkythecat · Post by **stinkythecat** » 6/21/2003, 3:38 pm

Meow.

emily · Post by **emily** » 6/21/2003, 3:40 pm

fuck, you really need to be banned.

Candy-coated Fake · Post by **Candy-coated Fake** » 6/21/2003, 3:41 pm

Ooo...banning party! Let's start a coalition to ban stinkycat. Sounds tasty.

emily · Post by **emily** » 6/21/2003, 3:50 pm

we can cook him over a fire

Candy-coated Fake · Post by **Candy-coated Fake** » 6/21/2003, 3:52 pm

Mmm...charred cat.

I'd rather subject him to painful Chinese torture.

emily · Post by **emily** » 6/21/2003, 3:53 pm

how about we make him commit seppuku.

Sufjan Stevens · Post by **Sufjan Stevens** » 6/21/2003, 4:01 pm

Hah, there's an asshole on the board that isn't me.

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A song/poem thing...tell me what you think.

A song/poem thing...tell me what you think.