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committed · Post by **committed** » 2/22/2003, 4:01 pm

awesome

specifically lines 6 and 7 and the entire fourth stanza

Endymion · Post by **Endymion** » 2/22/2003, 4:08 pm

heh, it's all so pointless until you find someone.

and then when you lose someone..

it's back to feeling a total lack of direction.

like there'll never be anyone as perfect.

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/22/2003, 4:11 pm

yeah it's true

there's definite disappointment

liam · Post by **liam** » 2/22/2003, 5:40 pm

lots.. of... strangness... maybe itll make sence when i get someone... or lose someone..

Sufjan Stevens · Post by **Sufjan Stevens** » 2/22/2003, 8:31 pm

Endymion wrote:heh, it's all so pointless until you find someone.

and then when you lose someone..

it's back to feeling a total lack of direction.

like there'll never be anyone as perfect.

I've never heard anything more true than that. But then again, when you get some one new, it's funny how the prior girl means absolutely nothing to you. If I wasn't so damn young, I'd love to just give up dating and settle down with some one (not marraige) and just be with her for a long while. But yeah, that won't happen until I am out of college....

Bananababy · Post by **Bananababy** » 2/22/2003, 10:07 pm

Endymion wrote:
because she's never felt
so beautiful or alive

someone who'd hurt me
because I'm worth losing
someone who'd want me
because I'm worth missing

those are my favorite lines.... i like it.

starvingeyes · Post by **starvingeyes** » 2/23/2003, 4:45 pm

i give it an overall rating of 3 cheeseburgers and 6 orgasms. nice work.

happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 2/23/2003, 7:18 pm

i've got to agree with that rating.

luckyJQ9 · Post by **luckyJQ9** » 2/23/2003, 9:14 pm

that's an awesome poem. it struck me the entirely the right way, and that's hard to come by.

2+2=5 · Post by **2+2=5** » 2/27/2003, 11:21 pm

wow. that's great.

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