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A pop-up book of flowers from grade 4 are driving her insane...
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sitting with you on the porch steps
i asked if you would ever love me
i already knew the answer
but i had to ask anyway
it's better to hear you say it
keeps me from getting my hopes up
one of these days i'm going to realize
what a let down it really is
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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I like it, a lot. I feel like writing now.
I faced death. I went in with my arms swinging. But I heard my own breath and had to face that I'm still living. I'm still flesh. I hold on to awful feelings. I'm not dead... My chest still draws breath. I hold it. I'm buoyant. There's no end.
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thanks
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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I wish I could write. :(

I wasn't born with that talent.
HARDCORE!!!

OMG. I can't believe I din't think fo you
until now because when I think on
a scale of one to ten you're like YWELVE.
No, seriously?

I <3 my HLP!!!!!
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I can write. Stories and stuff like that. But not poetry.
!EMiLY!

sweet blasphemy my giving tree
it hasn't rained in years
i bring to you this sacrificial offering of virgin ears
leave it to me i remain free from all the comforts of home
and where that is i'm pleased as piss to say
i'll never really know
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wrong again
never believing in yourself
never knowing yourself
never realizing yourself
right again

and you'll be there
you'll be there
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