Okay, I know I'm obsessed...but ya gotta check this out!

This is for you, this is for us...
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Illusion
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Okay, I know I'm obsessed...but ya gotta check this out!

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This is my favorite song of all time! I'm working on this with a friend...plz tell me if it's any good so far.

You may have to turn it up kinda high to hear it:
http://media.putfile.com/Life-arrangement-incomplete
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The part that is representative of "how many times have you been pushed around" reminds me of the piano riff from an 80's song that I can't remember the words to....or the name of. That one part throws me off. I do like the chorus of it, I thought it sounded really nice. Not bad, I just think that one riff is weird, the rest of it sounds good. maybe slow the intro just a bit? Good luck!
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Post by Illusion »

ya! that part is bugging me a bit too. thanks for pointing it out :) .
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that's cool. I liked the part where you had the vocal melody in thirds (I think it was thirds, at least). I'm actually just in the process of finishing up an arrangement of life myself, for the piano. It's pretty simple compared to yours though.
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