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another as of yet untitled
Posted: 12/2/2002, 1:21 pm
by committed
i want to see your skin
and become a part of it,
be swept away in a sea of
pale, serene curves- your
lips, your hips, and your
dips; skin as sweet as
honey and as soft as
clouds. you're my angel
and your body is
my heaven. essence
that makes life worth living.
Posted: 12/2/2002, 5:07 pm
by starvingeyes
jeff is, sure as shit, a star that rocks.
my eternal admiration goes out to you. autograph my man boobs.
Posted: 12/2/2002, 6:34 pm
by One-Eye
It's good stuff.
On a related note, do you ever write, think, or post anything that has nothing at all to do with sex?
Posted: 12/2/2002, 6:39 pm
by sandsleeper
^ haha i was wondering that myself.
might i add, however, that it is very good
Posted: 12/2/2002, 6:41 pm
by superrgirll
I wish i could find a nice boy who would write me poems, but all i seem to find are the asshole, using, loser boys
Posted: 12/2/2002, 6:45 pm
by committed
Aerindipity wrote:It's good stuff.
On a related note, do you ever write, think, or post anything that has nothing at all to do with sex?
*puzzled*
this is the first poem i've written about sex. and it's not really even about sex.
superrgirll wrote:I wish i could find a nice boy who would write me poems, but all i seem to find are the asshole, using, loser boys
*waves*
Posted: 12/2/2002, 6:47 pm
by superrgirll
*waves back*
Yes Jeff, you are a nice boy, but i need to find a nice boy who lives relatively close to me. (i can't find any though
)
Posted: 12/2/2002, 6:56 pm
by committed
superrgirll wrote:*waves back*
Yes Jeff, you are a nice boy, but i need to find a nice boy who lives relatively close to me. (i can't find any though
)
oh
*takes a few steps north*
now am i close enough?
Posted: 12/2/2002, 6:58 pm
by superrgirll
You're getting there
Posted: 12/2/2002, 6:58 pm
by committed
all right!
Posted: 12/2/2002, 8:03 pm
by emily
i didnt think it was about sex, just very lovely.
it reminds me of another piece of poetry but i can't remember what.