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Posted: 2/13/2003, 1:24 am
by committed
you laugh everytime i bring it up
and remind me we'll never be more than friends
you're so sure there is someone meant for me
but even surer that it's not you
one of these days you'll see
until then i'll just have to deal with it
or maybe you're right
then i'll have to deal with it forever

Posted: 2/13/2003, 3:01 pm
by Sufjan Stevens
I like it. You're good at writing little songs like that. I am sure you meant "I'll" instead of "I'm" though. But yeah, very very good.

Posted: 2/13/2003, 3:09 pm
by committed
yeah i noticed that typo then forgot to change it, thanks for reminding me

thanks for the compliment.

i've written these three weird little poems the past two days. no real reason. at least i don't think...

Posted: 2/13/2003, 3:12 pm
by Sufjan Stevens
I like them, a lot. I wish you'd put these to music asap because I'd love to hear them.

Posted: 2/13/2003, 3:26 pm
by committed
i actually wasn't planning for them to be songs

but heck maybe i'll play around

Posted: 2/13/2003, 10:36 pm
by 2+2=5
wow.

Posted: 2/14/2003, 6:23 am
by xoNoDoubt69
I like this one the best. Very Nice :nod: