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Posted: 11/12/2002, 12:40 pm
by starvingeyes
what do you need?
because lover, i swear
you've got it all
there's a world inside of you
of soft curves and
warm skin
a rich sky made of
your sweet smell
a paradise
without a judging god
Posted: 11/12/2002, 2:21 pm
by Endymion
perfect.
Posted: 11/12/2002, 2:22 pm
by committed
i am speechless
Posted: 11/12/2002, 2:33 pm
by Susan
Very impressive.
Posted: 11/12/2002, 3:13 pm
by lora
fabulous. simply fabulous.
Posted: 11/12/2002, 9:34 pm
by curtman16
Worthy of a Response, which is talented! You just writing poetry or are you going together some lines and music to it?
Posted: 11/13/2002, 7:18 pm
by sandsleeper
i really like your reference to "a paradise without a judging god." i've been giving a lot of thought to this topic lately, about how we're always being judged by everyone, even by a so called god in the end. paradise would be a state of complete nonjudgmentalism. then all we'd have to fear is ourselves. good line. 
Posted: 11/13/2002, 8:20 pm
by ALongGetaway
wow. thats beautiful. it really is.
and ^i totally agree with you. ive actually thought about that too.